Thursday, July 16, 2009

Probably Pertaining to Prose and Poetry

A poem should be equal to:
Not true.

A poem should not mean
But be.

If those lines, apart from being absolutely brilliant, evoke a sense of deja vu, or brought back memories from school, that's probably because most of us have read this in uniform. Ars Poetica, by Archibald MacLeish.

Yes, you recall now, don't you. Depending on who you were, you probably remember because of the stifled giggles about reading a poem about an Arse, or because of the unforgettable (though not, IMO, accurate) start...

A poem should be palpable and mute

As a globed fruit,

I remember, quite vividly, balking and jumping at that line. A poem is not palpable, a poem is not mute, and a poem is certainly not a globed fruit. Unless, of course, you're holding a Mango. Now THAT is poetry in motion, even if the only motion involved is from my hand to my mouth.

But again, the poet does make up for this personal gaffe, by going on to pen those absolutely brilliant lines, as have been described above.

The reason I'm so involved in these lines is because I believe life can be lived fullest on the lines of a good poem. I look around, and see paragraphs of terse, boring prose walking around. People are so concise, so formal, so unbearably correct. Don't take me wrong, I'm all for good communication, lacking so much of it myself. Yet, you could do with a couple lines of poetry offsetting all those lines of prose. Get those feet tapping again, you know? Deep breath, cracking knuckles, stretched limbs, that sorta thing. Except that this stuff goes to your stress-busting organ, whichever that is for you.

Don't be surprised, I know people who claim they relax by using their Brain, Heart, Stomach, or even lower down,... their bladder.

Anyway, overact, exaggerate, lie to please, sing, dance, let loose, break stuff you haven't dusted for over a year, just unwind. Then go back to your dull life, armed with the knowledge that the poetry will return. I'm no philosopher, saint, or botox-enchanced, wrinkle-free, beyond sell-date celebrity. But still, lend me a ear. Do you trudge through lines of prose for a romantic couplet, or is the music in you so well and truly dead.

Author's Note: By no means is one form of living much more beneficial than the other. In fact, there are a lot of stuff you can do, whichever camp you belong to! That's right! Say, commenting on this post for example. Does that little button saying 'Publish' know if you're prose, poetry, or yesterday's pizza? I'll leave that as a practical exercise.

Saturday, July 11, 2009

Night...

How many of you feel that the evening sets you free, sorta. As in, the trials of the day are past, the worries have melted away, and a big, wide, near-plastic grin is painted on your face. You know that the day has ended, yet it has only begun. The night is the playground of the revelers, and revelry is a reflection of the child inside.

On the canvas of darkness,
That guards the eternal abyss,
God once painted a picture
That still unmatched is.

It is unmatched in beauty,
Splendor, and wonder alike
But above all unmatched
In depth, the depth of life

The night speaks to me, whispers even
While the day favors action and haste
The darker sibling tells tales of life
Of love, anger, and feelings likewise base

The smooth, silken voice of the midnight breeze
Carries heaven's words that the wise stars partake
(They watch over us, didn't you know?
The grid of life, doth this truth show)
Words of wisdom, pearls of the night
When the world sleeps, my soul awakes

~Night, shining bright.

An Excerpt...

I think the best part about writing poems is the extrapolation, the exaggeration, the imagination. Prose very often restricts us, in that it forces us into details, methodically, albeit thoroughly. Poetry in essence gives a peek into the soul of the poet, at least the part of the soul that lived the poem. I for one am convinced that 'faking' it is easy, meaning, with a little imagination and loads of RomComs, you could write a pretty realistic poem of pining away in love.

The following lines are excerpts from a poem I wrote a few months back. If this is 'faked' or not, I'll let you people decide. What's the fun, otherwise! :P

From "Dawn and Dusk at the gates of Noon"

...
She walked past, nay floated,
Took my will with her
The lock broke, Emotion sprung forth,
She let my will wither
...
Three blinks hence, the moment passed
The sun too began to retreat
...
That she was like a sun, not the poet's moo
Would to some seem strange
To Ignorance I say, even the Moon's beauty
Sometimes waxes and wanes
...
Yet it was over, all too soon
Dawn and dusk at the gates of noon
...

This is one of my favourites, actually. The title is inspired by the Floyd album title, "The piper at the gates of dawn". The imagery of the line is beautiful. You can just imagine a huge, ornate door thati guards the dawn, opening with a small crack that then blows the door wide open. The crack of dawn, furthermore.

Sunday, July 5, 2009

The Gladiator

It is peculiar that in the story of great battles, the loser attains a level of heroism and fanfare that is matched only by that of the winner. In other words, great battles may have only one winner, but they have no losers, for the glory of the fight is what, like the gladiators of yore, most of the battlers fight for.

The deed is done, the hour is nigh
Blood and sweat, spilled in equal measure
Your words belie what spake your eye(s)
When the prize was lost, gone was the treasure

When Gladiators walk out, the world doth watch
In respect, in boredom, but mostly in awe
For they wear on their sleeve brave hearts
And fight for honor, to be the bravest Caeser saw

But Gladiators are lucky, in that they
Go quickly; a sword, spear or similar bane
Ignominy sits heavier than Armour they say,
Fittingly, they live not long in shame

But you, the world will not swallow whole
(Offer you escape from a battle fought hard,
Offer you escape from a battle lost hard,
And so it is fated, that you pick yourself up)
Go out, as a proud Gladiator once more.

~The Gladiator

Breathe, man! Breathe!

The blood is pounding, pounding in your ear
Truly astounding, it bangs so loud
Yet without, it does not show
It's iron will desires to make you bow.
Promising, daring, to break through
Sneering, threatening to show!

Your heart rebels, demands to leave
Demands to rest, to relieve heave
It pounds too, like the child begot\
Joins own blood to register revolt

Outside, the world in oblivious bliss
Inside, the idea seems ludicrous
The calm divide seems to bubble
Your pulse registers ineffable tremble
Sweat breaks out above the brow,
Inside your palms, the nose below.

The world bends and curves viciously
Periphery shrinks and bloats assiduously
The seas where never this violent before
Suddenly now, revolt wherefore?
Suddenly now, why this sweat
Why this reminder, to this demi-god of legions)
That Mortality takes unkindly to neglect

Then the solution, it doth seem silly
But the silliest things dawn most slowly
Thus it dawns, and with it light breaks
This dense, thick blanket you shake
When emotion overwhelms, through your pores
Through your every fibre seethes,
All you need to do, is just breathe.

And the world is back to linear normalcy
The blood flows downward, the limbs revive
Thankfully, the delay proves not too costly
And the life in you was never so alive

(But you to me this point must cede
You had forgotten the need to breathe)

~Breathe

Tsk tsk tsk... too much tension, mister Roger Federer :)

Friday, July 3, 2009

The rain falls slow...

Pink Floyd has the best lyrics ever. It goes so well with their vocals. Dreamy... puts me in a creative mood right away...

This particular one was kick started by Poles Apart, from The Division Bell... and like all inspirations, the role that this has played is shrouded under layers and layers of conscious thought...

[Note: The layers of conscious thought are peeled away ;) The words below sound better when set to the tune of the song mentioned above.]

The rain falls slow,
We don't realize who we've become
The beads are light,
Skim the surface, there's nowhere to run

Slowly and surely now,
The grime and dirt come loose,
The anger gives way to love
We can see the truth, again......

The rain falls slow,
We can feel the soft, heavy beads
They sparkle and glow,
The beauty of life is back, one more

Why did we get this way,
What have we done in a fit of rage
Why do we need the rain to stay,
What have we killed that can never come back....

But the rain falls free
And all our worries, aren't meant to be
The rain falls fast
In this moment of rapture, we realize
This is what we were born to be
This is what we were born to be
As the rain falls free.

Well.. i dunno why i wrote all that. I believe the Rain is a watershed of emotion, when something that we've built up for so long breaks loose, a small trickle at first, then a proper flood. It washes away the barriers we've put up for ourselves, designed to hide what we believe from us and everyone else. So by agreeing to 'feel' once again, we can live life on our terms, deal with whatever comes, and just enjoy the emotions washing over us.

I have absolutely no idea what prompted me to say something so perfectly removed form the quaint and unassuming life that I lead. Either the four walls of my home encourage creative tthought, or I was a hippie in my previous birth.

Don't worry, be happy. Peace :)